First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

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First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:21 am

Hi guys!

I am done with the first draft, I copy pasted a lot from Hanna and your problem statements/research questions (but also wrote a bit myself ;-) ). The last section is much to long, however. Please give me a problem statement of 2 sentences, we cant have half a page for everyone. And for those who did not do it yet, please update your RQ and PS in the wishlist section. This part is incomplete until I have a final RQ and (short!) PS from everyone but I thought I would upload it anyways so that the others can start working. Find the draft here! Feedback welcome! If you dont like the whole uploading thing, just send me an e-mail.

Have a nice evening! LBB! What a Face
Jakob.

p.s.: Or do you think the last part can stay this long? I think its too much...

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Charlotte on Sun Mar 21, 2010 4:29 am

Hey Jakob,

I shortened my part, made it 3 short sentences not including the RQ. I hope that's ok.
I agree with you, that the part should be a lot shorter in general.

I also corrected some spelling mistakes. About how to refer to the Ambition statement, the APA style says that when not having an author, the title (usually in a shortened version and in inverted commas) itself should be named, plus year and page number..so like this ('Ambition statement', 2009, p.1).

here is the updated version.

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improving first part

Post  hanna on Sun Mar 21, 2010 4:47 am

I am now working on Charlotte's last version. So, it would probably be better if you, guys, wait unitl you update it unitl I have uploaded my version.

Thanks,
Hanna

I have corrected minor mistakes, made comments, rewritten some sentences and updated my part on the European dimension. If the latter does not cover all aspects you deem necessary, let me know!

I'll send you the paper on eleum since i don't know how to upload things here. can anyone tell me how?

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Charlotte on Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:05 am

Hi Hanna,

to upload papers open this link sendspace.com/, browse your document and click on upload file. Copy the download link and paste it here. That's it.

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:57 am

until then find it here. ;-) Its really two clicks, give it a try. I posted a foolproof step by step description under "Problems with the Forum" but charlotte pretty much says it all there...

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:08 pm

Thanks a lot for the reviews so far, I will update it tomorrow so that its ready for Tuesday. Just wanted to make sure that the others can start. Are there some general problems with it or do you think it will work?

And please upload the papers here. It is ridiculously easy and I would really love to have everything in one place so there is no confusion. Here is the latest version, reviewed by Charlotte, Hanna and Yvette. Also, it would be nice if you could use the "track changes" setup of word so that I know what you changed.

bye!
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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  olli on Sun Mar 21, 2010 4:06 pm

Hi, please find the latest version here.

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  hanna on Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:12 am

olli wrote:Hi, please find the latest version here.

for jakob:

it seems logical to me to start off with olli's part when discussing the themes. i will follow this outline in the literature review, too.

integration
- public vs elite
- small scale artists
- gender

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European dimension (would use the same term as in the Ambition statement, not European identity)

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:17 am

ok, that will be the order!

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Wed Mar 24, 2010 3:47 am

The third part of the updated file I brought yesterday is online here for Marie and the final draft of the introduction is to be found here. I have the text which I need for the reference in part I at home so don't worry about the (reference needed!) thing, I will add it in the final version.

p.s.: Was it my task to attach the list of questions or is that you, Marie? I forgot. Doesn't really matter I think...

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  marie on Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:10 am

hey,

I don't remember neither but I can attach the list of questions. Are the ones in the methodology part the final ones except for mine?

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:45 am

no, the most up to date ones are here.

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  marie on Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:55 am

Thanks again.

Just one question concerning your RQ. I won't write out the problem statemnet in the list so is it ok to then leave out the part of 'does Maastrihct have the problem?' and just put it as:'How can Maastricht integrate local and regional actors who are concerned with small scale projects into the process?' or do you want to include what problem you mean in the RQ?

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  Jakob on Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:07 am

only the question is absolutely fine!

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Re: First Draft Introduction + Aims + Structure of Research

Post  marie on Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:43 am

great! I thought so.I was just checking to make sure that I will write down your question the right way and not leave out something you find important for it....

thanks a lot, marie

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